Magnetic Poetry Challenge: Bright Breeze Breathe

 

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Doug, Mr. Elusive Trope, has issued a poetry challenge using an online magnetic poetry program.

Click on the link below to see mine: http://play.magneticpoetry.com/poem/Nature/kit/39238/?h=a5ad4827db6f630fa9c377d316b2d2bb

And here it is written out with punctuation.  I’m not completely satisfied, but I was determined to work with the words I had. Also, I’m not good at screen shots, as you can see. 🙂  This was a learning experience.

 

Bright breeze breathe

gentlest murmurs

over bird and bee,

as dusk would shine,

I live wild and vivid

as summer vines

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13 thoughts on “Magnetic Poetry Challenge: Bright Breeze Breathe

  1. the pervasiveness of the breeze, all things touched by it…yet to seek not to be that, but one of things it murmurs over,..such as a vine, wild and vivid. Splendid job,

  2. Pingback: Magnetic Musings on Monday | Elusive Trope

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