Microfiction Challenge: Shapes in the Mist

Józef Chełmoński, Cranes, Source: Wikipedia

 

We’ve traveled far, my crew and I. We’ve journeyed past thousands of stars and worlds. Our small ship has sailed through space. None of our kind has ever been this far away from home. Our voyage has taken decades. We’ve slept much of the time. Our automatic system has awakened us occasionally to perform some needed task. Or maybe it was simply to give us a break from sleeping, from dreaming of the unknown and those we’ve left behind.

Now we’re all fully awake. It’s time. We’ve landed on this green world, the third planet in a system that revolves around a bright yellow star of average size. We’ve sensed signs of life. We pause now at the doorway. Large creatures swim before us in the murky water. An uncharted world with uncharted waters. I’m going to stand for a moment, my tail held high, before I issue the command. I want to remember this. In a moment we will raise our wings, and fly out in formation to meet them. First contact.

 

My second attempt at a microfiction challenge: Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge: Shapes in the Mist 

The prompt is the painting above and the words, “uncharted waters.” There’s a 200 word limit. My story is 173 words.

 

 

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