Those Left Behind

viktar_smatau%cc%86_1994_farewell

Viktar Smataŭ , “Farewell,” [GFDL (http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html) or CC BY-SA 4.0-3.0-2.5-2.0-1.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0-3.0-2.5-2.0-1.0)%5D, via Wikimedia Commons

 

He was gone /  She watched his ship vanish, incandescent

No trace left/ gone, an unmarked path to undiscovered territory

A journey of miles / a journey of years

Across indigo seas, uncharted  / amidst radiant spheres, unknown

Would she ever see his smile? / would she hear his voice again?

She felt no sense of wonder for his voyage/  she felt only fear and regret

As she bid him farewell / as she watched the trail of light in the sky disappear

 

This is a cleave poem (the left side is one poem, the right side is another, and both parts form a third poem. This is for Secret Keeper’s Weekly Writing Challenge. The prompt words were:

Gone/Sense/Trace/Voice/Path

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By NASA, Space Shuttle Atlantis [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons

 

 

 

 

 

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14 thoughts on “Those Left Behind

  1. I recall that your first cleave was not that long ago … and you make them work. In this one, the shuttle didn’t come to my mind, but once I saw the image and reread it … it’s there. Well done!

  2. This was a intriguing way the idea of someone seeing their partner off, would think about possibilities of loss. (Both in the past ships and the present space ships.) It held the sense of dread and suspense.

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