New Year’s Doorways: Haibun Quadrille

This 44-word Haibun is for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge, where the challenge was to use synonyms for ambition and change, and it is also a quadrille for dVerse, where Grace asked us to use the word leap.

 

In the past, I leaped into the new year with aspirations. Now I glide on the slipstream of ghosts. Past, future merge in star songs. I wonder if doorways are opening or closing?

 

Pirouetting stars–

old year leaps into the new

embraced by moonlight  

 

 

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32 thoughts on “New Year’s Doorways: Haibun Quadrille

  1. I think this is my favourite thing of yours! I love it all. You have perfectly encapsulated the effects of growing older and wiser…more thoughtful, anyway. And done it so beautifully.

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  3. “Pirouetting stars,” aspirations and “the slipstream of ghosts” are such ways to show your own personal styled poetry. Merril, I look forward to more of your poetry in 2018. hugs

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