Laud the dawn chorus–
robin, cardinal, and wren
trill night into day
light streaming golden and pink
as cherry blossoms in spring
By Awesok [CC BY-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)%5D, from Wikimedia Commons
This tanka is for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, using synonyms for sing and celebrate, and for Frank’s Haikai Challenge.
i love the dawn’s chorus
Thank you, Beth. I do, too.
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#Haiku Happenings #4: Merril’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
Thank you, Frank!
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All the birds sing when it is spring!! Nice!
Thank you, Dwight! 🙂
Merril, I love this Tanka poem. It has great rhythm and flow. I can see your words. “…Light streaming golden and pink like the cherry blossoms…” This imagery is breathtaking. ❤
Thank you so much, Colleen! 🙂
A happy one, Merril
Yes. Thank you, Derrick.
Love that trill.
Thank you, Ken.
One of my favorite things about spring. (K)
Me, too. It makes me feel happy.
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