Thoughts While Walking a Loop at Red Bank Battlefield Park

They soar,

never stumbling,

effortless in their grace,

a leap into the shadowed world

unknown

 

and yet

familiar, cycles repeated

without striving. Them. Me.

I walk circles

at peace

 

 

This is a mirror cinquain for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, using synonyms for fall and try.

20 thoughts on “Thoughts While Walking a Loop at Red Bank Battlefield Park

  1. Oh, this mirror cinquain is excellent. I love the idea of walking circles. There is so much going on in our world around us (political implosions) that sway us from our peace. I’m glad you found yours. ❤

  2. Pingback: Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 103, “Fall & Try”, #SynonymsOnly | Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer

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