The child presses her face against the window glass
watching as the sun sinks into the sea
and the first stars appear in the sky.
She makes a wish as one streaks, burns, and falls
vanishing like her neighbors.
(“Poor things,” her mother had said
seeing their yellow stars.)
She wonders if they will send her a postcard
from wherever they are,
and if she can change her wish–
to see them again,
the doctor with the kind eyes
and his daughters with their long, silver hair
who had played with her.
The child, older now, presses her face against the window glass
and watches the stars in the sky
the bombs silenced,
she hears a song murmured by the wind
singing to her of hope and dreams,
bittersweet, like chocolate she remembers,
she sees streams of starlight
sowing dreams in sparkling silver waves,
thinks of her long-ago wish
and knows—somehow– it will come true.
This is for Secret Keeper’s Weekly Writing Prompt. The prompt words were:
| APPEAR | PRESS | POOR | CARD | FALL |
This is one of those (rare) poems that have me holding my breath until the end. Gorgeous.
Thank you so much, Jane.
The first part just came to me and I wrote it very quickly. I saw the little girl standing at the window. But then I didn’t want to leave it like that, so I added the second part.
I’m glad you did 🙂
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Ditto Jane. Every bit. Just wow.
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Thank you very much, Claudia!
Great imagery …. and then I saw the image at the end … Wow!
Thanks so much, Frank!
Thought-provoking, Merril
Thank you, Derrick.
Wow, yes, the holding of breath. And sowing the stars…what a beautiful image. (K)
Thank you very much, Kerfe. 🙂
This brought to mind Gary Wright’s Dreamweaver.
Oh–I hadn’t even thought of that. 🙂