This is the final day of Paul Brookes’ Ekphrastic Challenge. (The dates were a bit off.). I participated every day, and it was a challenge, but a good one. I think the art made me think in different ways and produce poems that I would not have come up with otherwise. And now, I have a group of poems to revise and perhaps put together in some format. Thank you to Paul and to all of the artists who provided their creative work for this project. You can read all about them by going to the link. Congratulations to all the other poets who participated. There was one image for today:
Like Birds
She chants the words–
like tiny birds they fly
from her lips, the magic drips,
and she slips fever-nipped
to the riverside.
Is the reflection hers, or some other–
who might have been spirit or grandmother?
Is it past or future, what was, or what will be?
In the water, what does she see?
Stars and moon, earth and loon,
sky, earth, all upside-down,
she can’t decide
as she gazes there, unaware of time–
it seems like ages–
but only a moment has passed—
and when it’s over, she’s still not clear
what she has seen in the bits and flashes—
they collide,
the feathered-darkness and eagle-sight—
the stark gloom and the brightest light,
both appeared, both are here—
under Orion’s Belt,
they glide,
and she knelt
while the moon was rising,
now midnight blue shifts and drifts
to eastern pink, and as the wind sighs
she watches doves soar, with coo and cry,
to vanish—somewhere far, up in the sky.
Reblogged this on The Wombwell Rainbow.
Thank you, Paul.
Congratulations on completing the challenge, Merril! You did a great job!
Thank you very much, Jill! And thanks for reading!
Mystical and magical to match the surreal art. I like it! And I like the idea of words flying like tiny birds.
Thank you so much! I was pleased with that image, too. 😀
I read this earlier today … and Pam hit it on the button – mystical, magical, and surreal are great descriptors – even a bit of fantasy. Well done, Merril …. and cheers to you for completing the challenge.
Thank you so much, Frank! I appreciate that.
A magic ending. This is a difficult challenge! But you have a wonderful group of poems I think. And I feel privileged to have so many responses from you to my art. Thanks! (K)
Thank you so much, Kerfe. I am mostly pleased with the poems I came up with.
I appreciate that you allowed me (and the rest) to be inspired by your art.
A grand finale to a wonderful achievement demonstrating such stamina.
Thank you, Derrick. 😀
Lovely poem, Merril! Thank you!!
Thank you for reading and commenting!