Inspired by AWD3 “Occupied” and GK3 “Abstract Art-Lily Pond
Once we had a Lily Pond
Behind the barbed wire we dream,
but try not to—
our existence is a nightmare,
a universe of grey
and we are ghosts trapped within it.
At night, I think of the lily pond,
in the vibrant green of that blackbird summer—
before–
when the air carried the scent of life,
and frog chirps and bird trills drifted like seed heads
on a balmy breeze.
Every rosy sunrise was a promise,
every violet sunset was an affirmation,
the changeable sky was a source of wonder,
and revolutions took us ‘round the sun
as the mountains transformed from emerald to amber —
sparkling jewels in a perfect setting
with an unseen broken clasp.
We spent our days entwined
and thought the filagree of love
and decency was enough.
I’m glad you’re not here,
where there is no color or birdsong
and the constant wind is a susurration of grief.
I am once again participating in Paul Brookes’ April Ekphrastic Challenge. Each day, I will post my poem(s) here. You can see the art and read the other responses by going to Paul’s site here.
The artists are Gaynor Kane, John Phandal Law, and Anjum Wasim Dar. Thank you for your wonderful and inspiring art!
Reblogged this on The Wombwell Rainbow.
Thank you, Paul.
Those last two triplets are so telling
Thank you very much, Derrick!
You saw grey among all that colour too. So poignant.
Thank you, yes. That barbed wire!
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‘We spent our days entwined
and thought the filagree of love
and decency was enough.’
– a wistful wish for bygone peaceful days: so poignant, Merril!
Thank you so much, Ingrid! 💙
I love that Gaynor Kane painting. It does seem like a fading memory, that the sharpness of the barbed wire has snagged, hanging in that “constant wind” (k)
Thank you.
As Jane and I were discussing the barbed wire really stood out.
Oh, lovely
Thank you!
Those last two stanzas–straight to the heart!
Oh–thank you so much! Something I love to hear!
You’re welcome, Merril!
Such a wonderful poem, Merril💛✨
Thank you so much! 😊
Oh wow, Merril. This was so evocative. Beautiful images of before and the heartbreak of now.
Thank you so much. 💙
I didn’t have any particular time period in mind.
You must be feeling better!
I think it’s one of those that could be applied to pretty much any time period.
I am sort of and trying to catch up (as you see!)
I did see, and I truly appreciate it!
🙂